| News Releases -- Opening Leads |
| I hate so many news release leads. How about this one? "Revolutionary parenting book is released to worldwide audience via online outlets such as Amazon.com, bn.com, and at retail bookstores nationwide, including Borders, Books-A-Million, and Barnes & Noble." Well, gosh, that makes me want to read the rest of the news release. Where's the news? Where are the benefits? Why would I as a reader want to read more? Why would I as an editor want to read more? There are new revolutionary parenting books published every day. That's not news. "xxx teaches us a radically new approach to parenting, unlike the many parenting techniques in the marketplace, this is the first one that shifts the focus back to the parents, and away from the kids. The result is a more peaceful and calm household, and a way to launch your kids out into the world as the great adults that you want them to be." How does shifting the focus from child to parent create a more peaceful and calm household? No logic to this paragraph. How is this radically new? Gosh, I'm sold. Now the third paragraph is interesting? It says something: "The key to good parenting depends on you, because you are the one you can ultimately control," says parenting expert and family therapist, xxx. "If you make sure you behave - even when your kids misbehave - then you have a greater chance of positively impacting the situation, any situation. Let's face it: parenting is the hardest thing you will ever do - but it can also be the most rewarding." From then on, there are some great details, but the news release is way too long and disjointed. No central message. The mistake most news release writers make is to try to say everything in a news release. The result? They say nothing. What is the key to a good news release? Simple. Tell a story. Take it down to one person, a real person. Key on that person's needs -- the same needs as 90% of your target audience. How can you change that one person's life? That's the story. Always was, always will be. Stories are never about abstract ideas, never about abstract audiences. Stories are always about people. Real people. People with hearts that break, toast that burns, and lives that always seem somehow incomplete. Your goal? To complete. |
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2 Comments:
John, this post makes The Publicity Hound wag her tail in glee!
You explained this so much better than I could, and I might refer my readers to this next week.
I tell authors the best way to promote their book is to NOT promote the book.
Give away free advice. Offer the solution to somebody's problem. Be a contrarian. Make people mad. Make 'em laugh. Help them live their lives better. Save them money. Answer theri most difficult questions.
That's how you get a journalist's attention. The fact that somebody wrote a book is not news. So did about 173,999 other people last year.
Your readers might like to see this Q&A on book publicity that I did with Absolute Write:
http://www.absolutewrite.com/novels/joan_stewart.htm
Joan Stewart
The Publicity Hound
http://www.PublicityHound.com
http://www.PublicityHound.net (Blog)
Great blog here! I'm definitely going to bookmark you! I have a opt-in leads site. It pretty much covers opt-in leads related stuff.
Come and check it out if you get time :-)
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